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Once you've got the basics right, you can think about using some writing tricks.

Slogans/catchphrases

These are short phrases connected with a product. They are short and easy to remember. They should say something good about the product.


"American Express? That'll do nicely." SAYS: This charge card is accepted everywhere and people will be impressed that you've got one.

"Ah! Bisto!" SAYS: People recognise and love the smell of Bisto gravy and look forward to a meal made using it.

Repetition

Repeating things makes people remember them. Advertisers:

word games

Advertisers often play games with words to make them more memorable. For example, advertisers use:

Example
Marmite uses the slogan "My Mate Marmite"

Example
Pringles use the slogan "once you pop you can't stop"

Example
Kit Kat uses the slogan "Have a break, have a KitKat."

The word "break" has a double meaning. It is the word used to describe taking a rest from doing something and also what you do when you eat a KitKat (break off one finger of the bar at a time).


Action words

Action words have an energy about them that makes them stand out. They call people to action.

Which are the action words in these ads?

Enjoy new Nutter Bar. Taste the difference. Try one today

Enjoy, Taste, Try


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Drive the best new car. Call for a test drive. Do it now.

Drive, Call , Do


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Emotive words

If something is emotive it means that it makes people feel something - for example fear, love, comfort or happiness.

Certain words make people feel an emotion or remind them of thinks that are linked to an emotion. Words like: "BEWARE", "DANGER", "RELAX", "COMFORT", "BABY", "KISS".

Which are the emotive words in this ad?

Saffo kills germs and keeps your baby safe.

kills, baby safe


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Advertisers often use words that make people feel excitement. Words like: "FREE", "NOW", "IMMEDIATELY", "TODAY", "SPECIAL".

Which words are meant to make you feel excited in this ad?

Nutty Bars Buy one get one free. Today only

Free, Today, only


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Descriptive words

Advertisers use descriptive words to try to create a picture in your mind. Words like: "GORGEOUS", "BEAUTIFUL", "BRIGHT", "GLORIOUS".

They appeal to all your senses: sight, taste, touch, hearing and smell.

Which are the descriptive words in this ad?

Magenta Hotels Stunning Locations. Charming interiors. Cosy rooms Mouth-watering food.

Stunning,  Charming interiors. Cosy,  Mouth-watering food.


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Informality

Advertisers often use a chatty, informal style of writing. This is easier to read and draws you in. They talk to you as though they were talking to a friend. For example, they use informal abbreviations, like "couldn't", "don't", "what's".

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Where is the example of the use of an informal style in this ad?

Club Blue Join in the fun tonight. You'd be a fool not to.

you'd


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Break the rules

Breaking the accepted rules of grammar and punctuation (within reason!) is used to add impact.

Come to Club Blue .  Tonight.

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