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| I was walking over waterloo bridge when
I see it, Whats that I said to my freind sam. Right their in front
of me eyes were a teem of synchronised swimmer practicing they're
moves in the thames. My eyes was tiered and I rubed them. When I
opened them agian, nothing had changed. To be fare, it were a warm
and sunnie day. You wouldnt get me swimming in water as dirtie like
that, thogh.
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I was walking over waterloo Waterloo bridge Bridge when I see saw it , . " What's that ?" I said to my freind friend sam Sam . Right their there in front of me my eyes were was a teem team of
synchronised swimmers practicing practising they're their moves in the thames Thames. My eyes was were tiered tired and I rubbed them. When I opened them agian again , nothing had
changed. To be fare fair, it were was a warm and sunnie sunny day. You wouldn't get me swimming in
water as dirtie dirty like as that, though.
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I was walking over Waterloo Bridge when I saw
it. "What's that?" I said to my friend Sam. Right there in front of
my eyes was a team of synchronised swimmers practising their moves
in the Thames. My eyes were tired and I rubbed them. When I opened
them again, nothing had changed. To be fair, it was a warm and
sunny day. You wouldn't get me swimming in water as dirty as that,
though.
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